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Imaam al-Shaafi’i Rahimahullaah said: ‘There is nobody except that he has someone who loves him and someone who hates him. So if that’s the case, let a person be with the people who are obedient to Allaah `Azza Wa Jall.’

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Scented Blood
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PostSubject: The door that never closes...   Tue Aug 18, 2009 3:08 pm


They lie to You
They cheat You
They neglect You
They give Your rights to others

But still You care
You feed
You shelter
You are there

They turn their backs
Even though they have no right to
They rush their meeting with you
But yet You agree to see them each time

They care not for linage
And ascribe unto You
The worst of Insults
But who else would feed them but You?

Their best friend in their time of need
Coming with their sob stories
They borrow, take and You give
They borrow, take and You give
They have no shame in asking

Impossible situations they come to You with
When all hope is lost they turn
In secret they speak
But in front of the world another face is shown
Taking in air so that their chests inflate
As if they rule whatever they walk upon

Priceless eyes you gave without a catch
But yet they still look to see what else there is
Assuming that it is their right to wake each morning
To be held by loved ones and laugh

Oceans of Mercy You posses
What even a mother cannot forgive is a mere feat for You

You see all
You see to what length they go to hide their sins
Coming to You claiming they are ones who have been wronged

Glory be to You!
You who gives man rights over You!

You who have nothing to gain yet everything to give.




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PostSubject: Re: The door that never closes...   Tue Aug 18, 2009 5:25 pm

the door that never closes, mashaAllah, is that the door of mercy, repentance?
How ungrateful we are to our Lord, who givs while we are ungrateful, who feeds while we give no right to the poor and watch others starve, unaffected, who gives us wealth while we only want more, unsatisfied, unmoved as we watch others suffer with povertyy... who quenches our thirst yet still we are heedless, unable to feel a twinge of regrt or compassion for our borthers and sisters enduring famine and drought, withour wter to drink let alone make wudhu...

subhanAllah akhi i am moved by your poetry, may Allah increase you and make your work a means to draw others closer to Allah and his deen
If oyu do mot mind me asking, what gives you inspiration to wirte in such a beautiful, thoughful piece of work/s? I want to be a writer, including an Islamic poet, yet my writng lackss any emotion or rhythm or beauty whihc i see in your work, for in my eyes you write ofrm the heart, like a true arab poet of the past... al i manage to do is wirte a long peice which no one is likely to read, yet lacks the ability to draw tears or compassion or regret... if you can help i owuld be grateful... alhamdulillah, keep up the work, inshaAllah wiht the intention (among others) of dawah... and drawing the owrld away from shaytan's tricks and illusions, his traps suchh as the tv and music and other so called leiisure must haves- for when t he world was bulit to read nad learn and sek knowledge, thye opened their eyes to th eturht, eyt knwo they are deprived of such beauiul works, due to the senses being duled nad corrupted by the filth of filling the gaze and ears (therefore heart and soul) with haraam.

wswrwb
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PostSubject: Re: The door that never closes...   Tue Aug 18, 2009 6:25 pm

JazakAllah khair..
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PostSubject: Re: The door that never closes...   Wed Aug 19, 2009 4:33 pm

AVeiled wrote:

If oyu do mot mind me asking, what gives you inspiration to wirte in such a beautiful, thoughful piece of work/s? I want to be a writer, including an Islamic poet, yet my writng lackss any emotion or rhythm or beauty whihc i see in your work, for in my eyes you write ofrm the heart, like a true arab poet of the past... al i manage to do is wirte a long peice which no one is likely to read, yet lacks the ability to draw tears or compassion or regret... if you can help i owuld be grateful... alhamdulillah, keep up the work, inshaAllah wiht the intention (among others) of dawah...

Sister if truth be told i have no idea why anyone would like my works.
I know why i write them as they mean something to me but i really cant see why anyone else would want to read it.

I get nervous every single time i post a poem thinking everyone is going to hate it, that i will be discovered for the one track writer i am.
Publish what you write and dont care what anyone says.
I get good feedback and i get negative. I only post it so that it may help someone that they might understand what i mean and build on that.

We do what we do to please Allah not the people.

Imagine the reward of someone being inspired by your words.
This is the net. Nobody knows who you are so what does it matter?
Most people in my personal life dont know i write.

Go for it sister and dont regret.
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PostSubject: Re: The door that never closes...   Wed Aug 19, 2009 5:34 pm

Brother Scented Blood, can I post some of ur poems on other forums, websites, etc? Obviously I'll link it to ur blog, etc.

Oh and I also agree with you bro.. in that I also don't know why anyone would like ur work Neutral










kidding :P
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PostSubject: Re: The door that never closes...   Wed Aug 19, 2009 5:40 pm

Bro post what you want, where you want.

You can even put your own name to it it dont bother me bro.
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PostSubject: Re: The door that never closes...   Wed Aug 19, 2009 7:11 pm

Thanks bro.. but no I wont be putting my name to it lol.. the poems are not very good u know.. I have to protect my rep.. so.. *roll eyes*
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PostSubject: Re: The door that never closes...   Thu Aug 20, 2009 10:17 am

i don't care what other people think of mmy poes as such; it's more what I think about them... I know why i right them, but i can't see it doing much good as no ones likley to read soemthing so long and dull... and no, ur poems r great mashaAllah like I said before... i still post them coz theres sum chancce of it affdecting someone, for Allah's sake, but i wnat to be able to rigt with more cinviction that it'll be reead and understood and acted upon, that the reason i wrote them is fulfilled...

and may Allah forgive us all before the door of repentance closes

oh, and i dont get any feedback at all so that doent bother me... it just shows me what i lack and need to improve upon; to write in a style that almost forces the reader to be moved, such as the scholars/writers/poets of the past, and som eof them today which r usually arabs yet there words (translated) oconveys so much truth and meaning... that's what i want to be able to do...
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PostSubject: Re: The door that never closes...   Fri Aug 21, 2009 1:52 pm

Lone wolf is the man!
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PostSubject: Re: The door that never closes...   Fri Aug 21, 2009 4:12 pm

You gonna confuse them dude...
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PostSubject: Re: The door that never closes...   Fri Aug 21, 2009 9:29 pm

That's exactly what I want, I hold some high positions in this place and have great powers which will prove useful in the coup d'état. What do you say bruzzer, should we turn this peaceful village upside town?
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