So far I've ony written poetry about the Deen even thought it's pretty useless; now i want to tr writing about glabl issues as it affect us today and i've never done so before.

here's my first attempt; (i know its terrible plus i dont like writing in this style, but tell me if it makes sense, if its totally terrible, improvements, ideas, ect. if it makes u think or jsut bores u right through - i don't care what the criticism is for at least it'll help )


RACISM KILLS



Tell me bro how it’s been down there in that filth u called home

Must be lonely down there but I guess being black made u used to da darkness

Haven’t heard from u since that day u were taken away

Coz they hurt u right more than I can eva say

Shunned with words spitting in ur face coz of the colour of ur skin

White thugs smashin into ur heart ‘n body, but no one cud see the bruises ‘cept me

Black and raw ur anguish shared on my soul yet I did nothing to save u from ur hell

Oh my bro it’s been so long since I’ve seen; where are u, ‘N why don’t u call

Ur memory never fades just increases my anger each passin’ day

Their fists pound into ur defenceless body while they looked on in disgust

Words u cud take, beatings u cud endure, arson and torture bringin’ u to the edge-

Then they went too far, crossin’ the boundaries of transgression past evil to insanity

I just stood there and watched too scared to save u, so afraid as never before

‘N it wasn’t me who was screaming it wasn’t me who was lying there

Blood spurting from ur agony, black sin in their hands black skin shredded by white

Yeah red blood not black not white- too coloured for them white murderers to deny



My friend my dear friend why don’t u speak to me, have I made u too angry to forgive

Or it is it simply coz the dead can’t speak no more, can’t peak no more, no more

Black ‘N white with nothing in between all their blind vision cared to know

Can’t hate night ‘N day, can’t swear at ink on paper; can’t kill their eyes for being black n white

So why did they take u why, how could they use that knife against you?

Why didn’t I stop them messin’ with ur soul with fires of racism too hot for Hell’s

I still picture dat blade stabbin thru u.. stood back when the ambulance tiik u away never t reyrem

Da ground closes in on you without discrimination, no such thing as segregation bro

Down there ur at peace no one tellin’ u o get utt dis country get outta ur home

At least u’ll get no aggro down there coz black or white, ur skin turns to dust- grey mix

Da police caught them thugs now doin’ life sentence coz of racism

Coz ur black ‘N I’m white- now I regret not defending u

What I wud give to protect u

What I wud give to see u once more and tell u how I feel

What I wud give O my friend to end the racism

To end the hurt

The pain

The death...

But all I can do is stop it happenin; again

R u with me?

End racism now.

Don’ t wait till ur best friend’s dead coz he’s black...

R u white?

R u black?

R u Asian?

R u Christian?

R u Muslim...

Are you human?



Destroy the barriers of RACISM and unite as ONE Brotherhood

U listenin’?

Bro or sis we’re all the same-

Don’t let anyone judge you by the colour of your skin,

Or by the garments u wear as symbols of ur faith,

Coz the only thing that raises us in the eyes of the Lord is piety

I’m white and he’s black and now he’s dead coz I didn’t defend him form racism.

Don’t let the same happen to you.

END RACISM BEFORE IT’S TOO LATE...

R U WITH ME?